"Not darkness, not light, perhaps
something in between, and is claimed by the darkness...as theirs. Though being
saved by the light, that which is saved must in turn save the world..."
By J.W. Baccaro
Title:
PROPHECY OF THE GUARDIAN
Author: J.W. Baccaro
Publisher: JW Baccaro Publishing
Pages: 481
Genre: Epic Fantasy
"Not darkness, not light, perhaps something in between, and is claimed by the darkness...as theirs. Though being saved by the light, that which is saved must in turn save the world..."
Darshun Luthais has never experienced the Nasharin Frenzy—the unbending will to challenge a stronger opponent, no matter the cost. He doesn’t know what he will transform into, has never bonded with an elemental crystal and has never seen any of the unearthly creatures his father talks about. Even though he’s an infant in Nasharin years, his life consists of nothing but constant training, striving to unlock the sleeping power his so-called accursed race is born with.
But all that changes when he is pursued by a Dream Assassin in the dead of night. What he witnesses will forever change his outlook on life and lead him on a quest only the strongest can complete.
“This epic fantasy is action packed, all the way through. Definitely a powerhouse for fantasy lovers. It has plenty of dark magic, tons of bloody battles, and even some seductive tones.
The chosen one faces his destiny with tribulations that at times favor Homer’s Odyssey and Iliad. While reading I also felt it resembled Lord of the Rings especially due to its epic length. I can not stress enough how well detailed the story and characters are. Nothing is ever lost in the pages. The timeline is incredible and every aspect continues to build. Wonderful and fascinating!
It is involving, meeting the chosen one as a baby, watching him grow as a young boy into an adolescent, learning to fight, learning who he is, and learning to love. There are many secrets that unfold and characters to meet along the way. From witches to elves, to gnomes and trolls there is sorcery and magic around every turn. The creatures met along the way are descriptively colorful and incredibly likable. Even the darker ones! Well, there are some gross ones too as I think of it. You’ll see!
As a side note, the author does not hold back in his details of war and how brutal the effects are on the people and the land. He sets his world in a beautiful background, so exquisite and then details the destruction during bloodshed and battle.
I’m usually not into a lot of battle stuff. This series however carried so much with it, more than just a battle book. The action was absolutely a big part of the story and without it, the fantasy would not be the epic level that it is, of course! But, there is also the magical side, the mythical and mysterious wonderment. The creatures are so desirable and they stayed with me as I read the story. The colors of the world are so vivid. And actually the magical aspects are my favorite parts of all.”
~Cynthia Ellen Jones~ A Hippie’s Bookshelf: Reading, Reviewing and Bookish Vibes
Book Excerpt:
The
clashing of swords began to fade as more and more men fell victim to the army
of Asgoth. Outnumbered and outmatched, Asgoth had taken the peaceful city of
Zithel by surprise. Human blood now painted the once beautiful infirmary
gardens, vineyards, and cemetery orchards. Even the manmade fountain, where the
people would cast in gemstones—a different stone for a different wish—now
contained the heads of Zithelian fighters. The decapitated heads turned the
water crimson as they bobbled within the pool.
Lord
Adeleric and his wife remained trapped in the upper chamber of the tower,
having no choice but to witness their people slaughtered. Heavy footsteps from
outside of the chamber door neared as the enemy stormed up the stairway.
“Rosa,
stay behind me!” Adeleric said, stepping in front of her quickly. “Don’t resist
them. We may have a chance.”
“Are you
sure it’s not our guards?” she asked.
He
sighed. “…They’re all dead.”
Suddenly,
what could have only been a dozen fists smashing against the door caused Rosa
to scream.
“Stay
calm,” Adeleric urged. “Let them come.”
The door
was breeched and in rushed a horde of lizard-like men, each of them double the
height of a common man. They looked around the chamber, seeing no other besides
Adeleric and Rosa.
“You can
have me,” Adeleric said.
“No!”
Rosa begged, clenching his arm.”
He grabbed
her hand and squeezed it, trying to reassure her. “You killed my army yet
spared our young boys and girls. Spare my wife as well. Let her go and take me.
Whatever it is you want of me.”
One of
the lizardmen snarled, showing its teeth that dripped with a discolored saliva.
It spoke in its own tongue to the others, and they separated. Six lined up
against the left wall, the others against the right.
Around the corner and
into the doorway stepped a woman. In one hand she held a staff, the other a decapitated
head, swinging it back and forth by its matted and bloody hair. She stood at
the entrance, smiling.
Adeleric
cringed, recognizing the corpse’s face, one of the fallen guardsmen.
“This one especially wanted me to
spare you,” the woman said. “His tone was desperate, unlike your other
guardsmen. So, I ended his life painlessly.” She released the head. Striking
the floor with a loud thump, it rolled off to the side.
The
morning sun shined through the chamber window brighter now, illuminating the
woman who had yet to move from the entrance. Adeleric got a better look at her.
She was not dressed for battle, no protection except maybe her leather
boots. She wore a long flowing purple dress
with a thigh high split. Because of the split, and the way she was standing,
her right black boot was exposed and dripping with blood; likely from the decapitated
head she had carried. Slowly, she began to walk toward Adeleric and his wife.
“I noticed
a working fountain outside,” she said. “Beautifully carved from stone, with an
abundant number of gems sitting at the bottom of the pool. I do love gems.”
“What
do you want?” Adeleric said, clenching a fist.
“Your
home is the highest point of this mountain. The only source of water flows at
the base of this mountain, the Azriel River. So, I ask, where are you receiving
your water source?”
“Water
has always flowed here, coming from within, spouting upward. We utilize it for
drinking and ornamental purposes.”
“Water
doesn’t flow upwards, you fool. Not unless affected by another source. You have
no such source. No higher elevations, no way to channel it. Unless of course it
is by magic. Perhaps this phenomenon is due to Arabeth’s crystal—his water
crystal.”
“I am not
aware of any such crystal.”
She
grinned from ear to ear. “I am, and one of the four resides within this mountain.”
“One of
the four?”
“The
crystals of power from the first age, lost at the end of the second.”
“I
repeat, I… know…nothing!”
She stopped
abruptly, now standing an arm’s length from him. Her icy breath and violet gaze
caused him to shudder. “Are you lying?”
“…I am
not. Do whatever you want with me. Just let my wife go, please.”
She
turned to Rosa who had been squeezing Adeleric’s hand. She leaned in closer to
her, staring into her fearful eyes.
Rosa
turned away, cringing.
She ran a
finger across Rosa’s cheek, her long black nail scraping the skin. She stroked
her hair, sifting her fingers through the strawberry blonde locks. “So beautiful,
you are, dearest Rosa.” Her eyes fixed on Rosa’s jewelry; earrings made
from amethyst and spinel necklaces of blue, red, and citrine. “Your husband must feel blessed, to have been given such a
woman of splendor. Surely, your deities have been good to you. I too am
somewhat of a deity, a goddess. Queen Talvenya is my name—”
“Do not
compare yourself to my Rosa!” Adeleric shouted.
Something
like a shockwave passed through the room, slightly heating the air, and
splitting a section of the wall. The lizardmen kept still. Adeleric noticed
sweat dripping from their scaly brows, as if they were afraid.
“Your
jewelry, dearest Rosa, give it to me,” Talvenya commanded.
Fearing
for his wife, Adeleric stepped in between the two.
Casting a glare, Talvenya reached
for his left shoulder. Gripping the cap, a cracking of bone brought a smile to
her face, and a scream out of Adeleric’s mouth. Next, she forced him to his
knees, pushing down on the fractured shoulder.
“Please
stop hurting him!” Rosa begged, quickly removing her earrings and necklaces.
She placed the jewelry into Talvenya’s hand. “Keep them. They’re yours.”
“I do
love gemstones,” she said, smiling delightfully. She put the necklaces on and
then the earrings. “Each one tells a story, just like the four crystals of
power you claim to know nothing about.”
“I don’t.
Please, leave my Rosa alone,” Adeleric begged.
“You’re
awfully fond of your Rosa. It’s quite precious.”
“We grew
up together—share everything together.”
She scoffed.
“And that makes her special?”
“…Please,
I am the one you must deal with. I am the Lord of this land.”
Talvenya pursed her lips. “Lord of
what land, this pathetic little mountain top I so easily dominated?” She
stepped closer to Rosa.
“Speak
with me, I beg of you!”
“Oh, but
dear Adeleric, you've already stated your ignorance of the crystals,” Talvenya
mocked. She slid her hand down Rosa's chest, pressing her fingers against her
left breast and tearing the clothing with her nail.
Rosa
quivered, keeping her head aside, avoiding Talvenya’s stare.
“Your
Rosa…” She smiled. “I'm going to kill her.”
Adeleric
rushed at her. Talvenya smacked him across the cheek and he fell to the floor,
smashing his face against the granite tile.
“Adeleric!”
Rosa cried.
He stood,
wiping the blood trickling from his nose. “Queen Talvenya, goddess,
deity—whoever you are, don't do this. I beg of you…”
Ignoring
him, Talvenya placed a finger under Rosa's chin, and lifted to see her face,
smiling at those terrified eyes and cascading tears.
“I'll do
anything you command,” Adeleric pleaded. “I'll search the mountain for you,
will not stop until that crystal is in my hands—for you. Only, don't
harm my Rosa.”
She grinned. “Tell your husband to
get down on his knees.”
“My
knees?” Adeleric asked, before receiving another blow to the face from
Talvenya's open palm. This time, he cried out in pain as his body hit the floor
once again, face-down. His cheeks were black and blue, swelled and bleeding,
and his chest throbbed because of the hard tile he had crashed onto. For a
moment, he could not breathe.
“Stop
hurting him!” Rosa shouted.
Talvenya
grabbed her by the throat and lifted her off her feet.
Adeleric
could hear Rosa gasping for air as her little legs wiggled back and forth.
Quickly, he stood. “I'll do whatever you say, just put her down.”
She
released her, and Rosa almost toppled over.
Adeleric
rushed over, stretching an arm around her waist to keep his wife steady.
“While you are standing so close
to her Adeleric, you should kiss your wife goodbye,” Talvenya said coldly. “It
shall be the last time you taste those blush-red lips of hers.”
Adeleric wanted to fight her. He
wanted to reach for his sword and separate Talvenya’s head from her body, see
if such a cold-hearted creature drew blood. But he knew he would have no
chance, especially with several lizardmen gathered around. So, he complied with
Talvenya's suggestion, only he tried imagining the idea as his own. He would
kiss her goodbye, passionately, believing he would see her again someday in
another world, another realm, where hate and brutality ceased to exist.
Reaching for her, he pressed his lips against hers wetting them, messaging them,
and inserting his tongue to taste her sweetness.
Her eyes
were full of tears and overwhelming passion.
Adeleric
wiped the tears as their gazes continued to lock. Then, slowly, he pulled back.
“Do not be afraid, my love. No matter what happens, we will always be together.
That I promise you.”
“How
touching,” Talvenya commented in a voice cold as ice accompanied by impish
laughter. “Now, I command once more, dear Rosa. Tell your husband to get down
on his knees.”
She
whispered, “Adeler—”
“Speak
the words aloud!”
She
looked to Talvenya, a submissive gaze accompanied by a sigh of sorrow, then
faced her husband once again. “…Adeleric, get down on your knees.”
Adeleric
obeyed but tried imagining the command only came from his Rosa—not inspired by
this so-called deity queen.
“Tell him
you love him.”
“I—I love
you,” Rosa cried, “…with all my heart.”
“And with
all my heart, I love you,” Adeleric pled.
“Now,
extend your hand,” Talvenya commanded.
Rosa
obeyed.
“Adeleric,
Lord of Zithel, take your wife's hand.”
Adeleric
passed her a glare, and then looked to Rosa. Tears were still cascading down
her cheeks. “Do not be afraid, Rosa,” he said, firmly gripping her palm.
“My
heart—shall always belong to you,” she answered, lightly rubbing her thumb over
his palm, letting him know she was aware of his warm touch, aware he was there
by her side, no matter what fate awaited her.
“And I
shall carry you in my heart, always and forever.” Adeleric closed his eyes and
leaned over to kiss her palm. The warm sensation of her skin disappeared
suddenly, replaced by what felt like cold stone. He noticed the same feeling on
Rosa's hand. Opening his eyes, he fell back at what he saw. Rosa, from head to
toe had become stone, like someone had carved a figure of her—immaculately.
He turned
to look at Talvenya. She was holding her staff high, pointing it at Rosa. She
cast the spell.
“Beautiful,”
Talvenya said.
Adeleric
sat speechless, his eyes still, never blinking. A difficult thing to accept;
one moment he held Rosa’s hand, speaking with her, the next, she is a figure of
stone. He squeezed her hand, perhaps to see if the hard element was real, and
when the reality of it finally sank into his heart, he fell to tears.
Talvenya
tapped the statue’s forehead with her finger. It fell back, cracking to pieces
as it struck the floor. The severed head rolled toward Adeleric and bumped into
his knee, stopping. He looked down on it, the face positioned upward, as if it
returned the gaze. A smile sang on her cheeks—the last emotion his Rosa felt,
happiness while Adeleric had been holding her hand. Teardrops spilled onto the
face as he began to weep bitterly. He meant to pick up the head, perhaps to
keep it to remember Rosa’s smile, but even that was taken away from him. A
black leather boot stomped onto the head of stone, crumbling the face to
pieces, grinding it to bits under the sole.
He peered
up to see Talvenya, standing above him, smiling like a demon with a gaze of
midnight darkness.
“What was
the point of this…? Why did you—you do this?” he asked.
“All
enemies are mere insects in my path. I do as I like.”
“That
cannot be the reason…”
She
stared at him a moment, her face going expressionless. “Why should she
have what was taken away from me? Why should you not feel what I have
felt?”
“But I
know you not!” he shouted.
“…It
matters not.”
“Then
kill me—kill me too!”
“In time,
I promise to.”
J.W. Baccaro is the author of Prophecy of the Guardian, The Coming of the Light and Blood Dreams. Always a lover of creativity, from works of literature to writing music with his electric guitar; even baking and cooking. When not working on his next story or lost in a good book, J.W. enjoys kicking back with a couple of tasty craft beers and binging on Kaiju movies, 80’s action flicks, Japanese animation and slasher films (particularly the one involving a hockey mask). Heck, he even enjoys a good romantic comedy. Feel free to email him at jwbaccaro@yahoo.com. He lives in upstate NY with his wife Melissa, his son Alexander, his German Shepherd and his three cats.
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This tale is way beyond Witches, Gnomes and Elves. It's the mythological Nasharin race, a new race in fantasy. Accursed by the Light, Feared by the Dark, and quite a descriptive tale with lots of emotion... :)
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